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Deep Flaming Pits of Hell
The burning flames that have surrounded you They have been here for many others too You didn't notice that they've always been there But you did notice how deeply everyone would stare Now the flames are closing in And your life is cutting thin You lungs fill up with smoke You cannot help but to choke You suffocate my sweet love But are you going to leave this hell to go up above? I think that the dieing answer is no your stuck in this hot, painful inferno
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| On March 20th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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pretty goood. nice. |
| On March 19th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is awesome i love it |
| On March 19th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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wow... you left me speechless. Great work! |


