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Deep Flaming Pits of Hell

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The burning flames that have surrounded you

They have been here for many others too

You didn't notice that they've always been there

But you did notice how deeply everyone would stare

Now the flames are closing in

And your life is cutting thin

You lungs fill up with smoke

You cannot help but to choke

You suffocate my sweet love

But are you going to leave this hell to go up above?

I think that the dieing answer is no

your stuck in this hot, painful inferno

 

 

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On March 20th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 pretty goood. nice.
On March 19th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is awesome i love it
On March 19th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow... you left me speechless. Great work!