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Resilient |
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Malice in Demonland |
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Malice in Demonland
Stomach pains and nervous ticks
her hands shake as she scrambles
for her tools
Malice, they call her,
is headed for Demonland
to visit
white rabbits
She wants to catch them
but they're so elusive
she cannot afford them
yet she still chases
A White Rabbit beckons her
taunts her and
laughs at
her anguish
He sits atop
the Rabbit Hole as
he's melting down inside
She puts her lips to the
other end to inhale him
in one breath
and he scurries around inside her
promising her nothing as
he whispers that "you're late
you're late for a very important date"
and as she listens
Cheshire cats grin in window corners
Hookah smoking caterpillars
count thier change
The queen of hearts soldiers
march in her ears
and shadows peek in and out
of corners
Oh how passionately
she seeks him again
and soon
Malice finds another Rabbit
and he squeezes through the Rabbit hole
as she inhales out of desperation
oh how she loves Rabbits so
but wants to let these Demon Rabbits go
Prancing around in Demonland
Malice forgets the time
Floating in and out
of smoke filled bliss
White Rabbits wash away
the pain
the tears
the memories of her
her family
her friends
her children and
all concerns
but
one
White Rabbits
and
now
"She's late, she's late
for a very important date"
with
a White Rabbit
| On April 18th 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said : | |
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wow...this is an amazing poem...very creative indeed i loved it and it really made me think bc as was said...the rabbit could be seen as a number of different things.... this is an awsome poem : ) |
| On April 17th 2007 inevitable82 Said : | |
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yea this is amazing, very descriptive and i love the metaphors. this poem could be the type of poem that cound change someone's life for the better, and i think thats great! be well! =) |
| On April 16th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Wow, very creative....nice piece |
| On April 16th 2007 crotchrotwedgy Said : | |
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Stellar performance, I like that the White Rabbits can represent a # of things. Keep it up!......Rhondoism |


