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idk i was just writing and got thisRate this Poem
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actin' |
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ironic |
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love you and hate you |
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begging |
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him |
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a poem with no meaning |
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now you have a haiku |
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its ok |
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insane |
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Drunken Prince |
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ironic
i dont know if im so good with poems
i have nothing really to say
poems are supposed to express your emotions
and right now i dont really have any to express
i mean i have feelings its just that
im not so happy or so sad or so angry
that i need to write about it
im kind of content with my life for now
its actually kind of boring
ive seen all my friends and a few other people
because of weight training i guess
but afterwards i have nothing to do
i occasionally go swimming to work on my tan
but there's nothing exciting going on
so i guess i am expressing an emotion
or two
boredom and contentment
but does that really count?
in good poems, usually,
they express great amounts of
happiness or grief,
but mine is only about me
being so bored that i am
writing this poem.
that makes sense, right?
i like poems, but should i even bother posting
this because it's really pointless.
nothing important or moving is said here.
it's more of me just ranting on about my contentment
and my wonder of me having the capability of writing
this poem. Kind of ironic?
| On August 25th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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Yes it's ironic that basically anything you write could be considered creative. And that's okay! Even if you don't feel anything now, it's only natural to feel euthryic and sort of "mrf". Just give yourself time (as you have judging from your later works) and the emotions will all be rushing back. The thought you expressed here, the single thought is what matters. Chaaaa. :3 |
| On June 13th 2007 Aaquaian Said : | |
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I agree, this is a good poem you have here. |
| On June 13th 2007 individulsong Said : | |
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i l ike it! i really do! it's great! of course those emotions count! =) |


