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actin'

Views (121) Pain Created on 4-1-07 Flag

you came to me  

actin' as if love's

a possibility

 

then you left when

i gave you my heart

 

you came to me 

actin' as if love's

a possibility

 

then you left me

with nothing  but

pain

 

you came to me

actin' as if love's

a possibility

 

but the real reason

you came to me

was to break my 

heart 

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On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao very intertaining
On October 23rd 2007 ha7 Said :
ha7 i like this one
On June 14th 2007 individulsong Said :
individulsong it's good. not the convential way to write a poem, and i like it. good job.
On April 2nd 2007 AutumnLeaf1015 Said :
AutumnLeaf1015 Interesting writing style