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Dont let go of my hand

Dont let go of my hand

Views (402) Love Created on 8-10-07 Flag



I love my life ...
I dont want to die..
am too young to leave this life

his pen fell off his hand
as he colapsed on the ground
crying and breaking everythin around

she saw him from far away
and knew what happened right away
wipin her tears away ..
trying to look calm as

she despertly held his arm
as he held her close
and closed his arm
she found no words to say

his heart went sore nd bitter
for a life he must go through
when his pain melt away
fate decided its time to go

I never needed anythin before
and now all I need is you
she cried her heart out
and couldnt say a word

if there is somthing i would do
I wanna die here with you
holdin you close to my heart
and keepin you till the end of time

she couldnt take it anymore
and then she died ...

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On June 9th 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr love it
On April 9th 2008 camhameron123 Said :
camhameron123 wow. very touching.
On February 4th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 Awww! This is really sweet and sad! I can kind of relate to this! You should write more poetry!
On December 20th 2007 thatbluewoman Said :
thatbluewoman AWWWWWWWW *n*
On December 17th 2007 pinkheffalump Said :
pinkheffalump i love love LOVE the title eeee! KD (its a face, not initials)
On November 30th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said :
Tiffiscool16 Really awesome!
On November 18th 2007 beccaboo073189 Said :
beccaboo073189 it's so sad, so sweet, so awesome!!!!!
On September 22nd 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 It's also a number of other things (love), but that's an amazing poem
On September 11th 2007 MrGoddard Said :
MrGoddard awesome poem there.
On August 21st 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 Really that is just so good! keep coming back to read it
On August 15th 2007 sparklingtears Said :
sparklingtears I really like it, good theme .. I thought he was the one dying totally got me there! good job
On August 12th 2007 cute0teacher Said :
cute0teacher WOW !!! i like it .. n i hate death ... if only we could have each other 4 ever
On August 10th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth beautiful!
On August 10th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 Amazing! This is very touching