Dont let go of my hand
I love my life ...
I dont want to die..
am too young to leave this life
his pen fell off his hand
as he colapsed on the ground
crying and breaking everythin around
she saw him from far away
and knew what happened right away
wipin her tears away ..
trying to look calm as
she despertly held his arm
as he held her close
and closed his arm
she found no words to say
his heart went sore nd bitter
for a life he must go through
when his pain melt away
fate decided its time to go
I never needed anythin before
and now all I need is you
she cried her heart out
and couldnt say a word
if there is somthing i would do
I wanna die here with you
holdin you close to my heart
and keepin you till the end of time
she couldnt take it anymore
and then she died ...
| On June 9th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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love it |
| On April 9th 2008 camhameron123 Said : | |
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wow. very touching. |
| On February 4th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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Awww!
This is really sweet and sad!
I can kind of relate to this!
You should write more poetry! |
| On December 20th 2007 thatbluewoman Said : | |
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AWWWWWWWW *n* |
| On December 17th 2007 pinkheffalump Said : | |
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i love love LOVE the title eeee! KD (its a face, not initials) |
| On November 30th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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Really awesome! |
| On November 18th 2007 beccaboo073189 Said : | |
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it's so sad, so sweet, so awesome!!!!! |
| On September 22nd 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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It's also a number of other things (love), but that's an amazing poem |
| On September 11th 2007 MrGoddard Said : | |
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awesome poem there. |
| On August 21st 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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Really that is just so good! keep coming back to read it
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| On August 15th 2007 sparklingtears Said : | |
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I really like it, good theme .. I thought he was the one dying totally got me there! good job |
| On August 12th 2007 cute0teacher Said : | |
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WOW !!! i like it .. n i hate death ... if only we could have each other 4 ever |
| On August 10th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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beautiful! |
| On August 10th 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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Amazing! This is very touching |


