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it's realy a rap but rap is my poemsRate this Poem
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who am I |
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save the rap game |
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who am I
Who am I,I'm the guy that walks around at night,lookin with a sharp eye preparing to fight,never to start it but just for defense,the intense sense of passion makes me able to make amends if it should be what the lord recommends,but I always have an aditude to crack at you if you should attack with brute,putting you down as I laugh at you,as I use body I do the math too,see while you show a sign of a jerk my mind is at work,thinking first but quick enough to despense fists in exchange for words,it gets worse if you should blurt and curse,see you show yourself as the wolf in the open outside of the trees,I'm the wolf you don't see but not disguesed as a sheep,see I'm real but what I mean is that you don't know my plans or the fight inside me,while you express it freely for you tatics to be released,I'm also joyful happy and full of wisdom,you can see it in my facial expression that I'm not a man with alot of agression,though every now and then I can get out of hand but regain myself with self discipline,jealousy doesn't dwell in me,cause I excel to be me,exhale and then breath,to relax and search well within Dean,while you bail to tv and wish you were someone else that you see,I know God is constantly watchin me,and probaly viewing if I commit sins and do what he does not agree,basicly it's safe to speak that I blatantly explaine me while it's plain to see that I consistantly stay me,so as I leave I say peace and live my life the way it was ment to be creativly,.......
| On June 2nd 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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KICK ASS MAN! |
| On April 6th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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That is really nice! God is watching! I need to be reminded myself! My anger can get the best of me! |
| On September 10th 2007 marlana79 Said : | |
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very nice:) I love it:) |
| On August 28th 2007 HRHHermione Said : | |
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Very nice... great way to put yourself out there.... |
| On August 24th 2007 happyare Said : | |
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Cool! It's so individual. |
| On July 28th 2007 wannabetimthe1 Said : | |
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thats a pretty good rap......better than a good amount i have heard people send me |
| On June 19th 2007 NinjaZMAN Said : | |
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Wow bro seriously that is a good song you need a record deal get a manager lol. |
| On June 14th 2007 dieromantic88 Said : | |
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i love it kick ass man |
| On June 13th 2007 jacoba3219 Said : | |
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man thats a really awsum poem, |
| On June 10th 2007 Wind226 Said : | |
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| On June 10th 2007 leeshaforeverr Said : | |
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wow, thats awesome, i like it♥ |


