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tick tock
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Created on 6-9-08
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tick tock tick tock
I hate this stupid clock
watching it take so long
listening to its never ending song
waiting to see your face
without any trace
of the mediums we have been using
as we watch the time we are losing
I wonder if I will see you again
and be able to begin
that special life
were we live as man and wife
but I still have to watch that clock
as it goes tick tock tick tock
it doesn’t care about our thoughts
or about how my body rots
with ever tick you are not here
and how with each tock I have more fear
that I will never see you again
and our last meeting was actually the end
every tick is a tick without you
but every tick is a tick closer to you
tick tock tick tock
I still hate the freaking clock
Please Login to post comments| On June 20th 2008 momsrule Said : | |
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this is very cute (: i can actually picture some guy watching a clock waiting for the one he loves hehe... i love it! you're awesome. |
| On June 19th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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i love this...is use the element of time in my poems too, but i use an hourglass. this is very sweet, you have a great talent in capturing emotion in the simplest words. |
