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was iming my gf last night and wrote itRate this Poem
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a girl i know |
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knight in white |
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beauty |
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me |
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win some lose some |
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never know till ya try |
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behind black hair she hides |
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happens |
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paper mask |
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taylor |
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passion |
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chemo |
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sassy |
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mothers |
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shattered life |
some silly ring
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before I met you I forgot what love was
and the things I always heard it does
makes you do crazy things
like wearing a silly ring
everyday just as a way
a symbol that simply says
I belong to you
that way people who never knew
the loving things i always told
they can just see it and know i was bold
time goes by
and no matter how hard we try
older we grow and older we get
but this poem isnt finished yet
cuz your symbol only grows with time
beyond the reason and rhyme
I now wear two rings
one made of gold but another that sings
cut deep into my finger
where it will forever linger
even if the ring should be forgotten
and the memories rotten
the mark shall always remain
its just another thing i have gained
by being close to you for so long
and finally have someplace i belong
because of you i see what love is
and its not some stupid rhyme
or some silly ring
its how my heart seems to sing
and how everytime i see ur eyes
every bad thought in my mind just dies
and there is only you
thats one thing thats always true
I wonder if u ever knew
just how much ive always loved you
| On June 20th 2008 momsrule Said : | |
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its so beautifullllllll ! |
| On June 19th 2008 hpfan731 Said : | |
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this is my favorite one i've read so far! that hasn't been very many, but i still loved every word!!! |
| On May 27th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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This is just fabulous. I wish I could vote more than once!!!!! |
| On May 26th 2008 missdarkness3 Said : | |
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I love its meaning in every setence.Its very lovely and unique
- Karrie Zenteno |


