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Created on 5-15-08
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the doctor gave one
but she already had three
I would kill for more
I get no chance
God received an angel
that only I know
I miss her so much
but I must survive without
she hates pouting
Please Login to post comments| On May 15th 2008 Chula252 Said : | |
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Hmmmm wow this was very original from your usual style ... I really enjoyed it, actually I'm still enjoying it... still absorbing it, I keep rereading it, and each time it sinks in a little deeper, subtle yet profound. This style works very well for you I would love to see more of it. Great Job. :) |
