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Drunk Again
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Created on 3-13-08
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Here we are again my friend
Another day at its end
Always here to comfort me
Help me to feel so free
Let me forget this day
To you I now pray
From the book of Jack
Where Daniels never lacks
And now what do we have here
I can practically smell his fear
Well he has an unusual line
Least he isn’t asking for my sign
No harm in letting him sit
He seems to have some wit
Maybe we can do more than talk
That way I don’t have to walk
Home alone like I always do
What’s the harm in someone new?
Here we are again my friend
Another day at its end
Always here to comfort me
Help me to feel so free
Let me forget this day
To you I now pray
From the book of Jack
Where Daniels never lacks
And now what do we have here
I can practically smell his fear
Well he has an unusual line
Least he isn’t asking for my sign
No harm in letting him sit
He seems to have some wit
Maybe we can do more than talk
That way I don’t have to walk
Home alone like I always do
What’s the harm in someone new?
Please Login to post comments| On April 25th 2008 ralicia Said : | |
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Schmernoffs for me probably spelt it wrong but drunkeness helps me make new friends :) |
| On March 18th 2008 madmarcus Said : | |
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Im more of a Jose Cuervo Guy myself. I think you got this pretty well down. If your not a drinker. they you should be a movie director. you can tell us drinkers how to be drinkers...thats a skill you can't teach (can you teach me how to spell teach?) |
| On March 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i'm more of a bacardi gold guy myself. i like this. |
| On March 13th 2008 Chula252 Said : | |
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So the seat was not taken after all :)~! I love how you turned this into a story, and gave us insight into the mind of the other person. Very creative indeed. I can't wait to find where this all is leading ... wait you do plan on doing a Part 3 right??? |
| On March 13th 2008 Kep89 Said : | |
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its different but i like it |
