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Created on 2-27-08
you love a guy this is true
but why wont he look at you
is there something wrong with your face
that makes you stand out of place
or is it the way you walk
or the friendly way you talk
if only he would see
that you want to be
more than just simple friends
not fit that traditional trends
be together and have that love
that people think is a gift from above
but once again he only says hi
and doesnt even try
to figure out the thoughts in your head
and your heart feels like it is dead
but why wont he look at you
is there something wrong with your face
that makes you stand out of place
or is it the way you walk
or the friendly way you talk
if only he would see
that you want to be
more than just simple friends
not fit that traditional trends
be together and have that love
that people think is a gift from above
but once again he only says hi
and doesnt even try
to figure out the thoughts in your head
and your heart feels like it is dead
Please Login to post comments| On February 28th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aww i can relate to this : / |
| On February 27th 2008 spoiledbrat09 Said : | |
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i love this poem.. it reminds of the chat post i put up... |
| On February 27th 2008 spanishangel81 Said : | |
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I once felt this way about a special friend. He still runs across my thoughts from time to time.But I have no idea why he just grew farther apart from me. We used to do everything together. My husband has no issue with us being friends. I just wonder what wrong with him(myfriend).awesome poem. I really enjoyed this! |
| On February 27th 2008 KaosQueen Said : | |
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): awww...this was wonderful, fantasticaly written! i loved every bit of it! |
| On February 27th 2008 Chula252 Said : | |
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Awwwww poor girl ... this is such a hard place to be in. *sighs* uugghhh I know all to well what its like to be in that spot. She's lucky to have a friend like you who understands the way she's feeling. You did a great job with this :). |
