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Love You to Death
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Created on 2-5-08
Until my heart beat slows
Until my veins release all blood
Unitl my breath shortens and stops
I will love you
When my hands are limp and cold
When my lips utter their last words
When my eyes shut for good
I will love you
The day you don't see me
The day you realize it was me all along
The day you know you finally want me
I will love you
The the ends of the Earth
And back again
To Heaven and Hell
And all in between
I will love you
What I am saying to you
And for all to hear
Is even if you don't feel it
I love you to death
Please Login to post comments| On February 26th 2008 JessicAngel Said : | |
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wow that is amazing! makes me think about that phrase so much differently...i think all true love should be like this! |
| On February 7th 2008 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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Nice take on such a cliche term |
| On February 6th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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That was really beautiful! So much emotion! |
| On February 6th 2008 Pooh455 Said : | |
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simply beautiful |
| On February 6th 2008 Pooh455 Said : | |
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simply beautiful |
| On February 5th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow...Amazing, as usual! |
| On February 5th 2008 twilight023 Said : | |
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this is soo sad, god sam... i love it |
| On February 5th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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WoW! amazing poem! I love it! :) Great job! |
| On February 5th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Very nice write. I enjoyed reading it. |
| On February 5th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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Very moving. I loved the style! It is awesome |
