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By My Side
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Created on 1-25-08
With you by my side
Everything's right
I can face the world
I don't have to hide
With you by my side
It all makes sense
I can see a brighter day
I can climb that fence
With you by my side
The pain isn't so bad
It numbs itself
I'm no longer sad
But when you leave my side
And my world comes crashing down
I will not fall apart
I will not make a sound
You may not know it
But you have prepared me for this
With every warm hug
With every sweet kiss
I knew it would end
The hurt will subside
I don't have to cry
If you're not by my side
Please Login to post comments| On January 25th 2008 babygurlj6 Said : | |
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thats adorable i love it!!thumbs up lol |
| On January 25th 2008 numba1chic Said : | |
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flows great and love the meaning behind it. keep up the good work! |
| On January 25th 2008 twilight023 Said : | |
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wow i like it, its so not like you, i mean god its not sad at all( well it kind of is). i think your getting better at writing okay poems. keep on working one the daisy!! |
| On January 25th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I like it! The ryhming is perfect |
| On January 25th 2008 lasaj8805 Said : | |
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a thiis go!!! i really like it |
| On January 25th 2008 JessicAngel Said : | |
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i really like this! the rhyme pattern is great! |
| On January 25th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Great work! I love it! |
