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Created on 1-20-08
Why don't they listen?
It's like no matter what
It's never good enough
They don't hear you
What you're saying,
What you're thinking
Reason has fled from their body
And you don't stand a chance
Even the simplest thing
Is no
Why don't they listen?
Requests are futile
In their presence
They don't comprehend
Why you want it so bad
It's like they don't want to get it
Like they don't want to hear you...
Why don't they listen??
Please Login to post comments| On January 24th 2008 darkfairee14 Said : | |
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this is really good.and it's definately true! |
| On January 22nd 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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its good. well writen...
*J* |
| On January 22nd 2008 krislynn08 Said : | |
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this is really good. I can relate to it. nice job! |
| On January 22nd 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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Wow!
This is amazing!
I can relate..... |
| On January 20th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said : | |
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I can definately relate...great job!! |
| On January 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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This is great! Sometimes I feel that way... Check out my poems some time! |
| On January 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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The ability to listen to someone is such a wonderful quality to possess, and even better is having one who will listen to you. Great work. |
| On January 20th 2008 XxBlessedxX Said : | |
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Lyke others, i can relate too:]
its great |
| On January 20th 2008 JessicAngel Said : | |
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this is pretty good |
| On January 20th 2008 twilight023 Said : | |
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this is great, i can so relate, you know |
| On January 20th 2008 MoOnZoMbIe Said : | |
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i relate. good work. |
| On January 20th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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This is awesome! I can relate... |
