twilight8218

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Simply Perfect

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Created on 3-24-08

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To live a simple life, is to be caged,

Everyday would be depthless, another chronicle in the sameness,

The potential would be held back and thus the wings clipped,

Simple dreams and simple hopes coming so easily you barely have to lift a finger,

There is black and white, but no shades of gray in between,

No sufferings,

No hardships,

No love,

Life would be perfect,

Perfectly simple without the feelings and emotions to guide and tempt your will,

You hear the thumping of your heart, but is it really there?

Is it just an illusion to make you feel alive when you are really far from it?

I hear the beat and see the rising of the air, but as I look into the shallow eyes of the perfect person I only see the hollowness within.

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On July 30th 2008 UnSane420 Said :

	this is awesome i really like it and i love the emotions in it i can feel them when i read it good work!

On June 19th 2008 muse4apoem Said :

	This is fantastic! Good write! ~Kudos~

On June 9th 2008 audica Said :

	it's good, but it's not what i believe. although that doesn't mean that ur not a great writer, cuz u are, i just don't see things the same way. but i do love this poem

On March 26th 2008 nanimalluver Said :

	this is soo good. it changes the way you look at things. and it fows really nicely

On March 25th 2008 twilight8218 Said :

	yes i know i am not the best poet in the world, but it is kind of based on the main character in my new story: UNTAMED: which will be out once Elsewhere is done (which shall not take to long) for a preview of it go to the last chapter in Diary of Secrets (the ninth one)

On March 24th 2008 brokenwings122 Said :

	I have to say, for me I didn't find the content all that alluring, but more so the message it sent and made you think about. Excellent.

On March 24th 2008 icewillow13 Said :

	i like the part: another chronicle in the sameness (it's cool)

On March 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	I really love this one! I love the meaning. That's how I often feel. Lovely job :)

On March 24th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :

	I love it. Beautiful written. I love it.

On March 24th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :

	wow i love it it flows beautifully.