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setting sun

Views (104) Other Created on 6-14-07 Flag

the sun is setting

our hopes are ending

this place and time

coming to an end

before we leave

give the chance to tell

what i fell

hopes, dreams

are ending

time, bending

one more day

sun to stay

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On September 1st 2007 Peanutjr8 Said :
Peanutjr8 great poem, i like all your poems they r just so good
On August 30th 2007 alexia66 Said :
alexia66 you seem to pull peopel in , good works again
On June 21st 2007 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 really really good (see I comment)
On June 19th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 awesome mia...good job
On June 18th 2007 kantokah Said :
kantokah u have a very intresting style. i like it alot. good job