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Sea Salt
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Created on 6-8-08
She once was happy
A life of no shame
No troubles to worry about
No pain with this game
It happenedso fast
She couldn't see
What was to happen
What was to be
The kiss he gave her
She cryed into the sea
The salt mixed with her tears
Forgetting her past
Forgetting all her fears
His face long gone for her memories
Scars in her heart
Just the reminder of the long ago pain
The door is finaly shutting
She will never feel the same.
( A.N I'm sorry I have not posted anything in sometime. I was working on my school work, and other things, and the sight would not let me log in. I'm sorry again for not posting anything new. If anyone reads this , pleases tell me what you think about my poem. But truthful, but also be kind. Thank you Twilightx23. )
Please Login to post comments| On June 8th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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I really liked this, it was good. Nice description. |
| On June 8th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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no one will ever feel the same either. |
| On June 8th 2008 Dustman99 Said : | |
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"The kiss he gave her
She cryed into the sea" I love this line. Well done. |
