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Fool Me Once
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Created on 1-12-08
Fool Me Once
Fool me once
Shame on you
Fool me twice
Fool me twice
Shame on me
Why didn't I see
That you really didn't care
You never really could share
Your true feelings with me
This was all just a game to you
Wasn't it?
I'm through,
Playing with the fire
I wish I saw
All those untrustworthy signs
Nothing more to say
Now I look for a brighter day
Please Login to post comments| On January 29th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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good job, I'm looking forward to more awesome work. |
| On January 22nd 2008 cjaskot Said : | |
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i love this one aswell =] |
| On January 14th 2008 darkfairee14 Said : | |
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I really ♥ this one!!!!!!!!Keep writing! |
| On January 13th 2008 Autumnr1 Said : | |
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yea people suck, i hate people who treat a relatioship like a game. then move on when they are tired of playing |
| On January 13th 2008 comacozi101 Said : | |
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I can totally relate :) |
| On January 12th 2008 amptone Said : | |
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I've felt like this a few times, not many but well written. |
| On January 12th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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amazing :) |
| On January 12th 2008 twilight023 Said : | |
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New one up, i hoep you all like it, sorry for the mistakes, and if you have anything you want to ask or say message me, and i'll be happy to answer you. Thanks Twilightx023 |
