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LOve Sick Game
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Created on 1-11-08
Love Sick Game
The days are longer
Now that your gone
My dreams are hunted
By your misleading face
My trust, you broke it,
Took it away
Leaving me to cry fro days
I can't believe you hurt me
I can't believe i didn't see
My heart is nothing more
Then a bunch of pieces
The dreams are unclear
Like the broken mirrors of fate
Smashed into millions of pieces on the floor
I see you in the pieces
Pieces of me
Leaving me to wonder
If all this was just
A battle of the heart
I had no choice but to lose
Please Login to post comments| On January 15th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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"The dreams are unclear like the broken mirrors of fate smashed into millions of pieces on the floor..." Brilliant! |
| On January 14th 2008 darkfairee14 Said : | |
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I like this one! |
| On January 13th 2008 comacozi101 Said : | |
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nice. it has good flow but watch how many times you use certian words |
| On January 12th 2008 amptone Said : | |
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Great title and it has a great flow, well done girl. |
| On January 11th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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wow...i love it |
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