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A Lost friend
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Created on 12-22-07
Sorrow fills her heart
As she is crying
Because she is falling apart
From all of the lying
Her breath comes to an end
Her heart is filled with pain
Because of the death of a friend
She feels like she has nothing to gain
Just only the pain
Her days slip into nights
Her mind is lost
It's so full of fright
The wish she made paied the cost
The evil is coming
Bringing forth the bad
The killer humming
Screams making her mad
She knows he's there
She can feel him all around
She just doesn't care
Deep within the pain she has found
The clock is ticking
As time slows down
The pain just keeps picking
At the unseen frown
Her friend is gone
Lost forever
The stupid mistake he made
Took away his life
Please Login to post comments| On December 22nd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow...Very emotional. I love it! |
| On December 22nd 2007 knatyapeach Said : | |
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yea this poem is deep
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| On December 22nd 2007 herfallenstar2 Said : | |
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i lost 3 people very close to me in the last month all to the same person, just at different times.... he didn't know what he had gotten into , then he met me.... he eats from a tube now. |
