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To the one that hurt me the most

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Hurt

Hurt

Views (343) Pain Created on 3-12-08 Flag

Taking back dreams

It always hurt me

I sit and scatter pictures

Nothing over the ordinary

 

I watch the days fade away

Leaving every step behind

Takin' in what's left of me

Lying without your care

 

Take back all your bitter memories

I really don't care

Hurt is the pain I dealt with me entire life

Now I can't stand it

 

You make so mad

You don't understand

You want me to get a life

And that's why I'm hurt

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On June 15th 2008 fatfreemilk Said :
fatfreemilk wow that was a great poem
On May 11th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said :
BreJroxURsox1 cool poem.
On April 28th 2008 lovelylite Said :
lovelylite love it!!!
On March 21st 2008 JaymeLyn23 Said :
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That last paragraph this poem could have done without. I can see the emotion that you put into your writing, and thats a big part of being a good writer. Keep it up!
On March 17th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter I totally know what you mean :(
On March 15th 2008 Bexi93 Said :
Bexi93 omg, tht is really touching and i really like the last two lines on how you said'you want me to get a life, and thats why i'm hurt' it just makes me picture a grl with ppl around her, suddenly she is starting to fade as every1 is shouting and beckoning towards her
On March 15th 2008 Darkenedsoul21 Said :
Darkenedsoul21 Beautiful!! You have some talent.. Very emotional nice job
On March 14th 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover that is so beautiful! i love it! A+++++!
On March 13th 2008 sliversideup Said :
sliversideup i love it nice job :)
On March 13th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 i like it :)
On March 13th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord this is more of a statement. I like it! full of emotion.
On March 13th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Emotional! I really like it! :)
On March 13th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex beautiful!
On March 12th 2008 mypoeticrage Said :
mypoeticrage I like it. I think if you took the time to change a couple of things it would flow nicely and leave a bigger impact, but it still projects great emotion
On March 12th 2008 hollistechik08 Said :
hollistechik08 oh wow... i love it... its deep... i know how ya feel =] ya, i know it sucks,... lol nicely written... love it =]
On March 12th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess I know how you feel. good job!!
On March 12th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 very good job. sad but real
On March 12th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Love it.
On March 12th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 love the emotion,great job! :-)
On March 12th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 that beautiful i love it so much
On March 12th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 emotional and easily relatable...good job again.
On March 12th 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC aww that's amazing!
On March 12th 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC aww that's amazing!
On March 12th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 wow thats really good, i love it!!! plz comment mine if and when you can!!!
On March 12th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Aww~ really good. I likes. :)