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The questions are lingering in my mind

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What is Our Song?

Views (197) Love Created on 3-6-08 Flag

What is our song?

Is it the one where the days go by

The one where you hold me tight at night

Is there one when you tell me how much you love me

What is our song?

Do we really have one?

The questions are lingering in my mind

I'm not really sure, but everyone want to know

What is our song?

The one that I can dance to

The one that will always remind me of you

The one that I will wake up to every morning and see you

So what is our song?

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On March 12th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH aaww cute : P
On March 9th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 gosh i love this! great job
On March 8th 2008 KateyBaby Said :
KateyBaby I like your poems bc they remind me of all my favorite country songs. lol. Only with different words.
On March 8th 2008 snakerulz Said :
snakerulz nice
On March 7th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Really cool
On March 7th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 awesome!
On March 7th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said :
Lovelyeyes0 u write very maturely for a 14 year old. *cocks head* but take it easy ur young. Plenty of time for love and war, oops I mean heartache when ur older. lol.
On March 7th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Our song is the way we laugh! lol I like it. Good job~ ash
On March 7th 2008 sliversideup Said :
sliversideup very nice:)
On March 7th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord LOVED it!!!
On March 7th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Cute!
On March 6th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very interesting poem, it makes ya think of your favorite song, Loved It!
On March 6th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 I LOVE IT!!!!
On March 6th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Unique idea, I like! Cool structure, too.
On March 6th 2008 lovesthestars Said :
lovesthestars I agree with the three below me!
On March 6th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Lol I love it it is cute!
On March 6th 2008 Kep89 Said :
Kep89 awe =]
On March 6th 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover sweet. that is awesome! ur a great poet!