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About an older couples love life...Rate this Poem
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Memories
I love the way you hold me
I love those days where we laugh until we'd cry
Because of all the full-filled memories
I sit back and doze off into a deep sleep
Where I'd be reminiscin' throughout the night
I took your hand to live with you
For better and for worst
I'd always love you and maybe more
Enjoying the summer of '59
Grabbing memories from time to time
I loved you forever and now the time has come
Days and days go by and we have grown old
Now is probably a good time to think happy
That's what I love most about love
As I look back in the past at old precious memories
| On March 12th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aawww! |
| On March 8th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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you've got a knack for writing here. |
| On March 6th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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awwww!!!! this was amazing!!! =D ur a great writer! |
| On March 6th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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awwww!!!! this was amazing!!! =D ur a great writer! |
| On March 6th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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Love it |
| On March 6th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Agh. So nice to grow old together. |
| On March 6th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's perfect! It dosen't need to be longer! It reminds me of a summerday. Out on the porch drinking lemonade and just relaxing! |
| On March 6th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Very sweet! to grow old with the one you love. that is worth living for |
| On March 6th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Very sweet! to grow old with the one you love. that is worth living for |
| On March 6th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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wow thats good, i love it |
| On March 5th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Sweet! |
| On March 5th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very good, I liked it! |
| On March 5th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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No I don't think it's too short - I like it; I really like it. Good job :) |
| On March 5th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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Very sweet. Good job |
| On March 5th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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thats so cute!! |
| On March 5th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is sweet. I like :) |
| On March 5th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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aww |
| On March 5th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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sorry it was so short |


