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Livin' Life Backwards
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Created on 3-5-08
Standing in an open field
Flowers and all
Watching days come to me
Flying away, not walking
Just something I do best
Taking the day off to spend on worry
Taking time to sleep in peace
Livin' the normal life
Turned backwards
Not your average day
Looking outside
Staring out the window
Instead of seeing everyday things
Why isn't it different?
Couldn't we be livin' life backwards?
[NOTE: I don't know if it makes sense at all. Some people I know go through the same thing everyday, so that's how I came up with this poem. Leave me some comments. Thanks!]
Please Login to post comments| On March 12th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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i like this |
| On March 10th 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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a bit confusing until i read it a second time but then i got it, it awesome |
| On March 8th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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very unique and thought provoking. deep. |
| On March 8th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is awesome and its different but thats what makes it good |
| On March 6th 2008 sliversideup Said : | |
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nice job |
| On March 6th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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like it |
| On March 6th 2008 k15smith Said : | |
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cool |
| On March 6th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I think I get where you were coming from. Nice! |
| On March 6th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It really makes me think. Everyone has days like this, where something seems different! Good work! |
| On March 6th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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I like it! living our lives backwards? can see that. |
| On March 6th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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i really like it |
| On March 5th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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an interesting look at things, pretty all right! |
| On March 5th 2008 hollistechik08 Said : | |
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BERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUV IT |
| On March 5th 2008 hollistechik08 Said : | |
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BERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUV IT |
| On March 5th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Very unique idea. I like! |
| On March 5th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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I like this one. |
| On March 5th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Aww I love this. This is beautiful. Nice job! |
| On March 5th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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It's beautifully written |
| On March 5th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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I've had those days=) good job. |
| On March 5th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I have a Backwards poem, and I was worried the same way. Still no. I understand this one. Nice job! ~ash |
