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tumblegrl1994

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But can't you give me another chance...

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+ 30	Leaving Only
+ 22	Stepping Stones
+ 24	Another Day till Tommorow
+ 24	I Messed Up
+ 30	Livin' Life Backwards
+ 27	Memories
+ 21	Your Love (Relentless)
+ 23	What is Our Song?
+ 34	Hurt

I Messed Up

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Created on 2-29-08

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I know I messed up

Can't you forgive me

Life's been miserable

Can't you tell

I messed up

Forgiveness

Another chance

That's all I'd want

It's in your hands

And it's up to you

I know

I've messed up

But can't you give me another chance

That's all I want

Please

I know I've had my issues

I know I make mistakes

But please baby

Don't go

I want you here with me

Will you ever forgive me?

Will my life be the same without you?

Will I suffer without you here?

I messed up

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On March 5th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :

	aww i love it

On March 3rd 2008 mydragonlord Said :

	We all mess up at one point in our lives, love this poem!

On March 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	We all make mistakes. It's good when we can admit that! Good for you. :)

On March 1st 2008 icsgrad07 Said :

	amazing,thats what my boyfriend kinda did when he messed up . but we've worked out our problems, again reallly good

On March 1st 2008 RealFiction616 Said :

	Good work.

On February 29th 2008 transgenic Said :

	I can so relate. Really emotional. Nice work!

On February 29th 2008 smlesarahsmile Said :

	eh... kinda complainy

On February 29th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :

	AWWS thats so sad

On February 29th 2008 ladyface12 Said :

	i really love ur poem it sell off to the world..............

On February 29th 2008 fallenXx420 Said :

	i really like ur poems. they r really good...

On February 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said :

	That's all I'd want It's in your hands. Thats my favorite line! I like it! :)

On February 29th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	I like it~ Nice work~

On February 29th 2008 Bexi93 Said :

	i luv how u emphise(soz bout the spelling) the phrase 'i messed up' but if u really want some1 to forgive u, u shouldn't have a negative attitude towards ur self cause it makes them think negative as well.