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It was just another day till tommorow...

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Another Day till Tommorow

Views (244) Other Created on 2-28-08 Flag

I wait all day

Nothing to do

I'm bored

what can I say

I bet you are too

 

Another day

Another hour

Makes me tired

Lying out at the bay

But smells pretty sour

 

Relaxing in the sun

Taking a break

From all my hard work

That I have done

I needed a break for God's sake

 

Now that the day is over

And nothing else to do

It was just another day till tommorow

Maybe I'll find a four leaf clover

And maybe get lucky too

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On March 2nd 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This is very relaxing. I enjoyed it!
On March 1st 2008 atay39 Said :
atay39 that was wicked, check out mine, im kinda new at poems, but ur are awesome
On February 29th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord LOL! I enjoyed this one, can relate!
On February 29th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 love it, it reminds me alot of my days, pleez keep me posted on your stuff
On February 28th 2008 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH this is great : )
On February 28th 2008 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 really good
On February 28th 2008 Trena09 Said :
Trena09 I like it Good job!!!!! I also have a new poem Masquerade =)
On February 28th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 love it
On February 28th 2008 gahmmmblah Said :
gahmmmblah its really good
On February 28th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 I love it!
On February 28th 2008 sliversideup Said :
sliversideup this piece has a very light and relaxed tone to it good job :)
On February 28th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic I like. Especially the last stanza.
On February 28th 2008 smursmuffinhea Said :
smursmuffinhea Wtf is (ABCAB) O_o I didnt know people stilled use a format for peoms XD But on the flip side this poem was great I can really relate =P
On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I like this one too. Not to worry~ I have no idea wha ABCAB even is. lol Someone enlighten me. This was a good peom. I liked it lots.
On February 28th 2008 Bexi93 Said :
Bexi93 well i dnt have much experiance with the (ABCAB) pattern but this poem is really gd.
On February 28th 2008 crazpaige Said :
crazpaige Beautiful
On February 28th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said :
Lovelyeyes0 and maybe get lucky too... hm... lol. nicely done. well describes the tedium of adulthood. lol.
On February 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This flows so nice! It has a nice story! :)
On February 28th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex lol. i like this i feel like this a lot lately
On February 28th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard The format really works. We all get those tedious, menotonous days where we wish it would end just so that we can start another day with, hopefully, something different happening.

I like this one.
On February 28th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 (ABCAB) I haven't really tried it before, so I thought I'd give it a shot. Leave me a comment :) Thanks!