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...Striving souls lose their faith...

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Leaving Only

Views (221) Other Created on 2-8-08 Flag

Day by day

Piece by piece

Two hearts comibine to one

Striving souls lose their faith

Leaving only their last breath they take.

 

The passion for success is unbearable

The rest is undeinable

I follow you for every minute to spare

Leaving only a simple touch 

 

Now that he's gone for good

It's time for you and me

But the last thing I knew

You were gone too

Leaving only our friendship

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On February 20th 2008 Lovelyeyes0 Said :
Lovelyeyes0 nice. I like it. I'm more of a rhyming kinda dude though. lol.
On February 13th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol I like this one.
On February 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I likes. It's pretty and lyrical~
On February 11th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord NICE!!! like the flow and feel you create.
On February 10th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 hmmm u've got quite a unique style. i like it
On February 10th 2008 listen147 Said :
listen147 awesome...ly sad! =[ but great! good job! just friends suck >.< lol
On February 9th 2008 mitchy8125 Said :
mitchy8125 deep.. love it.
On February 8th 2008 xxdarkprincess Said :
xxdarkprincess i like it your good at writing dont stop
On February 8th 2008 hirschey11 Said :
hirschey11 its very good! i loved it!
On February 8th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 like it very much
On February 8th 2008 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 I like it :]
On February 8th 2008 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole awe =[ its so cute
On February 8th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess OH, that is sad. Good write.
On February 8th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex it's sad... but sweet
On February 8th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s so sad....but its tru too..sweet girlie!
On February 8th 2008 crazpaige Said :
crazpaige This would make a pretty song!!
On February 8th 2008 punkdancr Said :
punkdancr very good!
On February 8th 2008 individulsong Said :
individulsong It's so.... real. I love that about the things you write. They aren't fake. They're just.... I don't know.. there.