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A Soldier's Prayer

Views (1390) Anger Created on 4-25-07 Flag

GOD AR YOU IN THIS PLACE? I SCREAM.

OR IS THIS JUST A DREAM?

HOW CAN YOUR CHILDREN LIVE THIS WAY?

HAVE I DREAMED THIS UP TODAY?

 

IS THIS PLACE YOUR ABOMINATION?

WHAT CAN SAVE THIS NATION?

IED'S, RPG'S, UXO'S, ON MY PATH,

ALL THESE WEAPONS OF DESTRUCTION.

YET NONE OF THESE CAN SAVE THEM FROM YOUR WRATH.

 

I HAVE FAITH YOU ARE THE MAKER,

THE ORIGINAL CREATOR,

ABLE TO PROTECT THIS PRETECTOR.

THAT IS WHY I SOLDIER ON!

 

 

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On January 3rd 2008 babyblue28 Said :
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amen and may god bless you and all our troops.my hubby is in the army,i know he feels the same way.good poem
On January 3rd 2008 babyblue28 Said :
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amen and may god bless you and all our troops.my hubby is in the army,i know he feels the same way.good poem
On November 28th 2007 neagrl13 Said :
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so cool i have a friend that is going the guards and it is perty sweet
On July 9th 2007 Aleera00 Said :
Aleera00 I'm planning on joining the Australian army when I am old enough, but, well I don't believe in God so yeah...
On July 3rd 2007 Tengu1992 Said :
Tengu1992 I love and agree with it....
On June 18th 2007 norrisac Said :
norrisac I love this!!! Thank you so much for this poem! Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket
On June 7th 2007 Angel72nd07 Said :
Angel72nd07 This ia an awesome poem, My dad's been in the army for 22 years, So things like this are always capturing my attention.
On May 27th 2007 RoKkErBiTcH Said :
RoKkErBiTcH LUV IT !!!
On May 22nd 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 I like this...I'll rate for you
On May 1st 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 I love this. My brother came back barly speaking.. He said that If god was there you couldnt tell
On April 30th 2007 CuddyBearGross Said :
CuddyBearGross Wow that's great I like it!!!
On April 29th 2007 pvtrobinson Said :
pvtrobinson freakin awesome. wats a uxo?
On April 29th 2007 heartbraker101 Said :
heartbraker101 I like it a lot and it is so true thumbs up
On April 27th 2007 tink198 Said :
tink198 This is really good, keep up the good work!
On April 27th 2007 amberelaine445 Said :
amberelaine445 i love it!!! nice poem!!
On April 26th 2007 LolaMeesh Said :
LolaMeesh Amen!
On April 26th 2007 theoneuseek101 Said :
theoneuseek101 It was amazing! I love it!
On April 26th 2007 emotaz Said :
emotaz thats soooo cool! im going into the army when im 18! and so is my brother!
On April 26th 2007 mandiecandie72 Said :
mandiecandie72 i really like it keep up the good work
On April 26th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said :
xxlostsoul14xx Good job, it's really good.
On April 26th 2007 mysterywhateve Said :
mysterywhateve Really good I thought it was good!!
On April 26th 2007 keykay Said :
keykay This is a really good poem. Its one of my favorites!
On April 26th 2007 sunny102 Said :
sunny102 Very well put...you should forward this through e-mail, so it can reach the many brave and courageous troops who so generously give for us to hold on to our freedom...God Bless you and all the other selfless soldiers...:)
On April 26th 2007 cornnutsrcool Said :
cornnutsrcool very nice, one of my favorites.:)
On April 26th 2007 sexibexiii Said :
sexibexiii Praise God Nice poem, i really appreciate it God bless