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Created on 2-23-08
Transparent tears flow
Like poetry down my cheeks.
You wipe them away.
Please Login to post comments| On March 10th 2008 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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not bad, it takes some good writing to make so few lines carry meaning like that |
| On February 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is soo pretty. I love your Haikus. |
| On February 26th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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lots of meaning for something so short |
| On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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well done, I am also learning about hiaku, keep at it. |
| On February 25th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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This is grate!!! but then they always are! |
| On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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oh oopps my bad *blushes* sorry |
| On February 25th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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Hiakus have a pattern of 5 7 5 but it's really good and packed full of emotions |
| On February 23rd 2008 mccallrenee Said : | |
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short yes but so awesome sometimes u dont need alot of words to express something awesome job |
| On February 23rd 2008 tinkerbell8794 Said : | |
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I love it |
| On February 23rd 2008 KaosQueen Said : | |
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sweet :] |
| On February 23rd 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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it is a HAIKU! they are supposed to have three lines! and they follow a certain pattern of syllables... anyway i really like it! |
| On February 23rd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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I agree w/ Bexi93 but good job |
| On February 23rd 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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I love this one! |
| On February 23rd 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said : | |
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Great Hiaku!. I think that the message you have behind it would make an amazing longer one too. |
| On February 23rd 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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a little short don't u think, but for only 3 lines it does have meaning to it |
