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More Than A Ghost

Views (183) Love Created on 2-1-08 Flag

Light shows through the crack

Between the carpet and the door.

It’s the light I read your letters by.

That blissful period

Before your eyes adjust to the darkness

Is the time I think of you most.

I think I’ve run out of tears for you,

‘Cause they’re refusing to drip

Down my cheeks.

They stay behind a closed curtain

So the world can’t see.

But the show must go on eventually.

Wondering what could’ve been

Doesn’t do me any good now.

Your words and tones

Are forever imprinted in my mind.

I remember the threats you made,

But none of that makes a difference anymore.

I thought you were like a phantom,

Going through the motions,

Not feeling a thing.

But now you are a phantom,

And I so miss the days

You were [little] more than a ghost. 

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On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Amazingly written~ I love this. You definitely have some major talent!
On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch This is amazing!Well done.
On February 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord i promised myself that i would not be brought to tears today. well promise brocken yet again! beautifully written!!!
On February 2nd 2008 1GiJane Said :
1GiJane good work
On February 2nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 ummmm budy this is better than u give urself credit for. i thought well done. bravo.
On February 2nd 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 love it! absolutely amazing
On February 2nd 2008 Bexi93 Said :
Bexi93 wow, likeing this and the last line, in my pinion, is the best
On February 1st 2008 Akinka Said :
Akinka Amazing work!!! Loved the poem...
On February 1st 2008 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess I love the duality you gave to the last line
On February 1st 2008 crazpaige Said :
crazpaige wow, nice work
On February 1st 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 wow i loved every part of this!
On February 1st 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
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Awesome!!
On February 1st 2008 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 Amazing, I still like it! :) Keep it up!