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The Very Last Tear |
More Than A Ghost
Light shows through the crack
Between the carpet and the door.
It’s the light I read your letters by.
That blissful period
Before your eyes adjust to the darkness
Is the time I think of you most.
I think I’ve run out of tears for you,
‘Cause they’re refusing to drip
Down my cheeks.
They stay behind a closed curtain
So the world can’t see.
But the show must go on eventually.
Wondering what could’ve been
Doesn’t do me any good now.
Your words and tones
Are forever imprinted in my mind.
I remember the threats you made,
But none of that makes a difference anymore.
I thought you were like a phantom,
Going through the motions,
Not feeling a thing.
But now you are a phantom,
And I so miss the days
You were [little] more than a ghost.
| On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Amazingly written~ I love this. You definitely have some major talent! |
| On February 26th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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This is amazing!Well done. |
| On February 4th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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i promised myself that i would not be brought to tears today. well promise brocken yet again! beautifully written!!! |
| On February 2nd 2008 1GiJane Said : | |
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good work |
| On February 2nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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ummmm budy this is better than u give urself credit for. i thought well done. bravo. |
| On February 2nd 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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love it! absolutely amazing |
| On February 2nd 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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wow, likeing this and the last line, in my pinion, is the best |
| On February 1st 2008 Akinka Said : | |
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Amazing work!!! Loved the poem... |
| On February 1st 2008 hpriestess Said : | |
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I love the duality you gave to the last line |
| On February 1st 2008 crazpaige Said : | |
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wow, nice work |
| On February 1st 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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wow i loved every part of this! |
| On February 1st 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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Awesome!! |
| On February 1st 2008 kg108551 Said : | |
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Amazing, I still like it! :) Keep it up! |


