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The Very Last Tear |
Fairytales
For every wish you ever made,
And every time you screamed,
I shed a tear, just to let you know how
Real these dreams are.
Yearning to see the beauty of
The unicorns, running into the dust,
And the distance of the stars,
Losing your mind to these wondrous fairytales
Every time you close your eyes.
Someday I'll take you there.
| On March 4th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Love this~ take me there! lol this poem is pretty~ |
| On February 22nd 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
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nice like the imagery and the style |
| On February 1st 2008 Bexi93 Said : | |
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nice, very nice. liking the way u said u would shed a tear, very sensitive. wrote a new poem called 'A soldiers dream' |
| On February 1st 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Nice!! have read some of your other work and must say this is good and your other work is even better. |
| On January 31st 2008 Jumpy1811 Said : | |
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it's really good, i love the imagery |
| On January 31st 2008 iLvJsus675699 Said : | |
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i love. |
| On January 30th 2008 assumetheworst Said : | |
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ive got to be honest, its not one of your best, but its still fricken awsome, and i love it :D |
| On January 30th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said : | |
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wow i could never make a poem like this this is awesome |
| On January 30th 2008 crazpaige Said : | |
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Pretty! I can actually visualize this happening |
| On January 30th 2008 1GiJane Said : | |
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cool |
| On January 30th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Agh, so YOU are the dream maker. I'm so glad to meet your acquaintance. |
| On January 30th 2008 Daemion Said : | |
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nice... but it could have been more substantial i think... =/ |
| On January 29th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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this is really good! you have a gift! |
| On January 29th 2008 teeniegirl015 Said : | |
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this is beautiful!!!!! omgg it's so good |
| On January 29th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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I love it. amazing |
| On January 29th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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awww....that was tooo cute. very creative |
| On January 29th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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It's cute,short,and to the point! |
| On January 29th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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Cute! |
| On January 29th 2008 Akinka Said : | |
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Very cute!!! |


