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Clinging To Consciousness

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Your cold hands hold me close,

I struggle frantically to break free.

It’s just too much to take.

My emotions overpower me.

You’re clinging on to consciousness,

While I hold back my tears.

The smell of this hospital is haunting me.

I give in and hold on tightly to your hand.

I know that the words we never said

Are the ones I’ll never forget.

 Thank you for holding me,

Thanks for always being here.

Words don’t always work,

So we don’t need to say goodbye.

But, baby, I’ll always love you,

I promise you that. 

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On March 5th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Beautifully written. I love your wording also. Once again~ amazing!
On February 22nd 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch So well done!
On January 29th 2008 Bexi93 Said :
Bexi93 jesus christ this is so moving. You have put lots of emotions into this wow!!!!
On January 26th 2008 KaosQueen Said :
KaosQueen naaww wow i love the feeling this gvaqe me...BLOODY AWESOME!! WOO FANTASTIC JOB!!!!!
On January 25th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said :
angelofpurity5 this is awesome it has so much depth to it ur an incredible poet
On January 24th 2008 1GiJane Said :
1GiJane awesome
On January 24th 2008 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst wowies thats good!!! great job :)
On January 24th 2008 crazpaige Said :
crazpaige that almost made me cry, I loved it! so sad
On January 24th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
absolutely awesome
On January 24th 2008 Jumpy1811 Said :
Jumpy1811 It's so sweet and wonderful and I love it.
On January 24th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord That was ... well ... AWESOME!!!!, it reminded me of "alone from here on in" beautifully written.
On January 24th 2008 jetkills Said :
jetkills wow amazing ^_^
On January 24th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 this is making me think of mi abuela...i love her so much.
On January 23rd 2008 teeniegirl015 Said :
teeniegirl015 The rythem is awesome. And the words. Wow words. I love words and you did really good with them in this. The title is cool too. Keep writing more!
On January 23rd 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex awesome:]
On January 23rd 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 Wow This was really good A lot of emotion and it's kinda sad in my point of view!
On January 23rd 2008 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 love. honetly do you publih these?
On January 23rd 2008 twilight023 Said :
twilight023 wow this is over powering, its just great, and so much more! keep up the good work.