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Write on my flesh because paper ripsRate this Poem
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The Very Last Tear |
Palm Of My Hand
Sketches on the pale flesh
Shaded in with a black pen.
Swallow your words,
They don’t mean a thing.
Letters you wrote to no one
Rip into pieces and throw in the fire.
Pens run out of ink,
And I run out of energy.
Restlessly I lay down
And take everything you give me.
Let the rain fall on us,
And let the needles pierce our skin.
Hook the paperclips together
And wear them on your wrist.
Sketch out random daydreams
On the palm of my hand
Because the paper rips so easily.
| On February 12th 2008 Babydotz Said : | |
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wow... interesting but very creative writing... I like this poem alot! |
| On December 4th 2007 FreakyGeeky666 Said : | |
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Really great! |
| On December 4th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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wow, this one is really great..it has many meanings behind it! |
| On November 30th 2007 edwardlover92 Said : | |
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very nice I love your unique imagery |
| On November 30th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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wow. its breathtakingly amazing. sorry it took me so long to check it out!!
*J* |
| On November 28th 2007 hpriestess Said : | |
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Sorry it took me so long to get here. I like this one too |
| On November 26th 2007 DarkSide1477 Said : | |
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i agree w/ evil, and awesome job |
| On November 25th 2007 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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so sweet, so dark, lol, yeah, |
| On November 25th 2007 EmoKid928 Said : | |
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really good |
| On November 23rd 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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this is really good i love how you came up with a poem that is truly Unique. I would never have thought of it!! Great job keep me posted when you get more poems up and ill let you know when i get knew ones up thanks for the comments |
| On November 23rd 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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Yes I agree with both, this rocks!
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| On November 23rd 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
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OOO nice!! |
| On November 23rd 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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neat, has several meanings! |


