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Write on my flesh because paper rips

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Palm Of My Hand

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Sketches on the pale flesh

Shaded in with a black pen.

Swallow your words,

They don’t mean a thing.

Letters you wrote to no one

Rip into pieces and throw in the fire.

Pens run out of ink,

And I run out of energy.

Restlessly I lay down

And take everything you give me.

Let the rain fall on us,

And let the needles pierce our skin.

Hook the paperclips together

And wear them on your wrist.

Sketch out random daydreams

On the palm of my hand

Because the paper rips so easily.

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On February 12th 2008 Babydotz Said :
Babydotz wow... interesting but very creative writing... I like this poem alot!
On December 4th 2007 FreakyGeeky666 Said :
FreakyGeeky666 Really great!
On December 4th 2007 darkangel726 Said :
darkangel726 wow, this one is really great..it has many meanings behind it!
On November 30th 2007 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 very nice I love your unique imagery
On November 30th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 wow. its breathtakingly amazing. sorry it took me so long to check it out!! *J*
On November 28th 2007 hpriestess Said :
hpriestess Sorry it took me so long to get here. I like this one too
On November 26th 2007 DarkSide1477 Said :
DarkSide1477 i agree w/ evil, and awesome job
On November 25th 2007 evildarkness13 Said :
evildarkness13 so sweet, so dark, lol, yeah,
On November 25th 2007 EmoKid928 Said :
EmoKid928 really good
On November 23rd 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 this is really good i love how you came up with a poem that is truly Unique. I would never have thought of it!! Great job keep me posted when you get more poems up and ill let you know when i get knew ones up thanks for the comments
On November 23rd 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said :
DeathMetalPunk Yes I agree with both, this rocks!
On November 23rd 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord OOO nice!!
On November 23rd 2007 ha7 Said :
ha7 neat, has several meanings!