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Created on 11-13-07
Unintentional acceptance,
Boy meets girl
Underneath the romantic sky.
Shattered moonlight,
Bloodshed with tears,
An epic journey.
Ruptured clouds,
Rain falls on the windows,
Making her vision blurry.
Friendships held with paperclips,
Artificial sweeteners,
Superficial self-esteems
Tortured pseudonyms,
Souls poured out in ink,
The paper rips so easily.
Censored words,
Bleeping out emotions,
Revising what we feel.
Hallucinations of surreal places,
Dragons shooting fire in the distance,
And fairies lighting the skies.
Unlimited inspiration,
Walking crowded streets with strangers,
Swallowing those broken regrets.
Please Login to post comments| On December 4th 2007 darkangel726 Said : | |
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i really like this one, it's kind of open-ended, depending on how you think about it. very good! |
| On November 20th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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aaaahhh same structure from "Enigmatic",, ,, very well done still,,,,,,,,,,, the shortness in each line gives the reader this shortness of thought and mind,,, very good,,,, oh and btw,, ^_^ i loved the expressed lines u made,,,, those are always fun to make up,,,, great job!XD |
| On November 17th 2007 DeathMetalPunk Said : | |
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wow this is great! I like it, again great vocab! but still just a tad repetitive. Oh well it still rocks! |
| On November 15th 2007 7countrygirl7 Said : | |
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This is really cool... you have a talent for this. This is one of my favs. Great work! |
| On November 14th 2007 edwardlover92 Said : | |
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again more chills |
| On November 14th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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great poem. awesome choice of words |
| On November 14th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
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Beautiful. I loved how you chose to protray the imagry! |
| On November 13th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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Thhis is a rather intriguing poem. i like it....intriguing. and u know what i like that it's intriguing. lol |
| On November 13th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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nice word choice and story line....amazing over all |
| On November 13th 2007 kelkel234 Said : | |
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That is so deep and sad. I loved it. O and thanx for the comments on my poems and my story. |
