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Fear
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Created on 7-31-07
Fear is navy-blue.
It smells like dead fish.
It tastes like black jelly beans.
It sounds like the waves of an ocean.
It feels like bugs crawling up my neck.
It looks like every human I’ll ever meet.
Fear is control.
Please Login to post comments| On December 31st 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I like it. It's different and wasn't what I was expecting, but its very good. I love the way you described the word fear. |
| On December 30th 2007 mylullaby01 Said : | |
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Very true. I like itt! |
| On December 23rd 2007 SpiffyKnickers Said : | |
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it was short, but you really said it all. |
| On November 2nd 2007 jjsmomm682006 Said : | |
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wierd i could actually visualize it. I like it. |
| On August 2nd 2007 kaykay123564 Said : | |
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wow awesome i like the words u used to describe things nice job:) |
| On August 1st 2007 Ericnessxo Said : | |
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Deep♥ Loved itt.. =) |
