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jet black world everything gone to sleepRate this Poem
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Created:
06/04 2009
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211
Category:
Anger
My Poems
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whispered words |
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forever and always |
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25
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fictitious |
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i wish.... |
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hungry? |
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anything and everything |
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midnight sky |
midnight sky
midnight sky
jet black world
everything gone to sleep
laying there
all alone
tears fall as I weep
door opens
and there you are
why wont you leave me alone?
you’re bigger than me
and stronger too
..but all I’ve ever known
(this doesnt feel finished....)
Please Login to post comments| On June 4th 2009 Thugnastay227 Said: |
| take time and ponder. and create a continuance when ur ready. i like what i've seen so far |
| On June 4th 2009 madmarcus Said: |
| I agree...it has potential..but you need to hit what ever poison inspired this...it is lyrical... |
| On June 4th 2009 atavanhalen Said: |
| I like it... but i too feel its just the beginning... |
