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Beautiful You

Views (105) Passion Created on 2-28-08 Flag

how I love the rose, both with delicate pedal and thorn

you, the fairest of all roses

You, the beauty of silent waters

The angel of the cresent moon

I could easily drown in your essence

 

I have been comsumed in the fierce flames of love

My heart is full of ghosts tonight

Other loves have come and gone

yet, you are the only love I long for,now

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On July 18th 2008 Dannibabe94 Said :
Dannibabe94 very good!
On June 9th 2008 Relica123 Said :
Relica123 Tim,Ur my idol!!!!
On May 15th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 hey i just wanted to let you know this poem is awesome good job...
On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia wow,ur so poetic.very poetic.I love that in you.
On March 27th 2008 keegan4606 Said :
keegan4606 awww. thats cute! =)
On March 4th 2008 xxMCRxROXxx Said :
xxMCRxROXxx amazingly good=)Did you write it for JJ? Josh is right, you should write loads more=)
On February 29th 2008 professormcgee Said :
professormcgee nicely done, u should write more
On February 29th 2008 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx cool