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my mind |
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torn in two |
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uncontrolable |
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shoot me now |
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one day |
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kill me now |
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who will help the fallen? |
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no more |
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to be set free |
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kill me now
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Created on 3-24-07
kill me now so i can excape the pain. kill me now so i can live with out fear. kill me now to free me from the lies. kill me now so i dont hear the words of hate. kill me not so that i can me free. kill me now so i can end this prolonged suffering. Just fucking kill me NOW!!!!!
Please Login to post comments| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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*speechless* |
| On March 2nd 2008 timewatch Said : | |
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sorry about the mistakes. i was really upset when i wrote this. |
| On February 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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The last three lines I love! Good job! |
| On February 23rd 2008 garomac Said : | |
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No I will not kill you, instead I will ask you to do something for me. I want you to find others with the same pain, hurt, and suffering, then make sure they know there are not alone in it. And together you can both work on making the suffering seem not so bad, maybe even make it go away all together. |
