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my mind |
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torn in two |
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uncontrolable |
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shoot me now |
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not enough |
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one day |
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kill me now |
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who will help the fallen? |
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no more |
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no more( verson 2) |
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to be set free |
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End |
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release |
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love |
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suicide |
one day
one day i will try to live with out fear. one day i will try to live with out guilt. one day i will live my own life. one day, one day.
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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Short but simple and powerful |
| On February 29th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I wish you would have added more. No complaints here really. It's somthing that few things need to be said. We all understand the feeling! |


