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shoot me now
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Created on 3-11-07
shoot me now if i do the things that are not proper in societys rules. shoot me now if i don't conform to the life that was thought out for me. Shoot me now if i am not the one that is the perfect friend for you.just shoot me now for the crimes that i did not commit. Just shoot me NOW. Dead on the spot for the wrongs that i have done. JUST SHOOT ME NOW.
Please Login to post comments| On April 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Did you repost this one? |
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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Man that hits right on the spot |
