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torn in two |
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shoot me now |
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torn in two
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Created on 3-9-07
Torn in two. My heart torn to pieces, scattered over the floor, all i can feel is pain, the pain that u had brought upon me. As i try to pick the pieces up all I see is you, braking me in two, riping my heart apart like a piece of paper like it is nothing. Torn in two, i try and try but all i think is u. So as i am here on the ground torn in two, i will try and try to get back to u.
Please Login to post comments| On March 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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That is really good don't change I thing! I really mean it! |
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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i feel like that at times. but overall great job! |
| On March 2nd 2008 iMorphinexX Said : | |
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You have a talent for poetry, keep it up. |
