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it is a wierd poem i wroteRate this Poem
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my mind |
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torn in two |
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uncontrolable |
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shoot me now |
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not enough |
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one day |
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kill me now |
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who will help the fallen? |
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no more |
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no more( verson 2) |
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to be set free |
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release |
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my mind
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Created on 3-9-07
my mind a place of fear. the worrys and pain the hate and the fears, they all replay and replay as i walk through my days. the pains of the things i have done the people i hurt. the fear of my hate that will go out of control at any time. the worrys that i place upon my own shoulders. I shake at the thoughts my mind gives me. I cry when my mind replays the times i cry or want to cry. I hate my mind the things it shows me and makes me feel. my mind a terrible place to be. It makes me to affraid to get close to anyone. my mind scaries me.
Please Login to post comments| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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wow that speaks out for it's self! |
| On March 2nd 2008 iMorphinexX Said : | |
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That's great, keep writing :] |
| On February 25th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Thats is deep. Goodjob! |
| On February 23rd 2008 degrassinerd Said : | |
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i like your poem. this is how i feel sometimes. |
