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my mind |
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torn in two |
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cry for more
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Created on 7-22-08
as my mind spins.
my hands tear throw my flesh.
blood is drawn.
my body will not easy.
it shakes for more.
it crys for blood.
i must stop the cry for more.
cold steal will end the cry.
Please Login to post comments| On August 19th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Sorry I didn't see that you posted this. It's sorta lacking. I'll think about it. Or I'm sure you can see what it needs. |
