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I AM
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Created on 4-1-08
I am me.
I am the sky.
I am life and I am Death.
I am not loved.
I am not a person who is seen or heard.
I am not a friend who is cared for.
I am the end.
I am blood.
Please Login to post comments| On April 1st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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To me I would have broken up a line. "Iam not a person who is seen." "Iam not the person who is heard." It flows a lil better that way. I love the cryptic message in this poem though! :) |
