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Created on 3-5-08
My heart is aching from the pain. Losing you is such a shame. Tears are flowing from my eyes, thoughts of you are burning time. Loving you was my only wish, yet you took that with a kiss.
Please Login to post comments| On March 6th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This is wonderful! Nothing elese needs to be said! |
| On March 5th 2008 iMorphinexX Said : | |
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Love it. Great job |
| On March 5th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I like the "thoughts of you are burning time"--that's a line that just stands out to me! |
