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my mind |
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torn in two |
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uncontrolable |
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shoot me now |
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kill me now |
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who will help the fallen? |
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to be set free |
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Created on 3-4-08
falling stars are falling hearts. never heard but fragil to the the touch. broken into pieces. love is just a lie. who could want someone as i.
Please Login to post comments| On March 5th 2008 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love the way that you started this one out. The last line kinda threw me off a little-I know you were going for the rhyme there, but I guess it just doesn't fit w/ the image I had of the rest of the poem. No worries-I still think you did a nice job w/ this one! |
| On March 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Like I said beautiful ryme! :) See your really getting into abstracting poems! |
