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my mind |
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torn in two |
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Created on 3-3-08
Hand hover, heart aches
Ears ponding, voice fading
Eyes white, lips light
Heart slowing, mind going
Life stops flowing.
Please Login to post comments| On March 3rd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's so interseting! Humm...I'm a lil confused on hand hovering. where is it hovering?Heart slowing, mind going
Life stops flowing. Strongest ryme. Whell the only ryme. try ryming a lil more! Enter it in some spots. Then you will have a master piece!
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