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Created on 3-2-08
I am a caged animal..... torcherd at every turn.... Unable to be set free. I am unable to live like this anymore! I choose to be set free!... The only way it will be done is by death, my own life or the one tormenting me. Either way all must come to a end.
Please Login to post comments| On March 2nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I whole heartly agree with her! In fact I was just about to type that in. Then I saw her comment! |
| On March 2nd 2008 iMorphinexX Said : | |
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No, dont delete it :]. Even if you take it off the site, which you shouldn't, keep it and look at it later and improve. I actually think you should build on it and make it longer :] Great job. I love the fact you touch on the deep sides of life :] |
