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Created on 3-2-08
As I watch the blood drain from my wrists onto the floor I know now that there will be no more. there will be no more pain, no more tears, no more lies.Can you hear my cries?..... Everything will be no more. ....For I will be no more.
Please Login to post comments| On March 2nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Yes! see I knew it would sound better! With that suggestion! And look you have a new fan! |
| On March 2nd 2008 iMorphinexX Said : | |
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:] keep me posted on your poems. I really like them. |
| On March 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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oh wow thats like really deep |
