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my mind |
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torn in two |
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shoot me now |
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Created on 3-2-08
As I watch the blood drain from my wrists onto the floor I know now that there will be no more. there will be no more pain, no more tears, no more lies. Everything will be no more. For I will be no more.
Please Login to post comments| On March 2nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Good ryming! A suggestion "no more tears, no more lies." Inserting "Can you hear my cries?" Would make it flow even better! Just some advice from a person a lil older! LOL I still like it though! |
